I think what you published made a ton of sense.
However, what about this? suppose you added a little content?
I ain't saying your content isn't solid, however suppose
you added a post title that makes people desire more?
I mean ファミリーオ館山 スタッフ便り 真っ赤に染まる空
is a little vanilla. You ought to peek at Yahoo's front page
and see how they create article titles to grab viewers interested.
You might add a video or a related pic or two to get readers
interested about everything've written. Just my opinion, it could make your
website a little livelier.